In my experience, love is synonym of unrequited,
but after all these years, I relinquished.
She thought she`d always have me on my knees for her,
but I got tired of the the horrible floor`s smell.
After all, maybe it wasn`t that bad,
but i`m slave of no one.
So all that time was wasted,
I think it won`t get better.
Cause, love is like that,
you`ll never know when it`s going to strike.
So just take my advice,
you won`t want to fall in love more than once.
Amazing work!!
ResponderBorrarYour poem is expressive, complex, personal, well written... what else could I say?
Hats off to all you boys who dare to speak which such clarity and beauty.
A couple of corrections:
- synonym takes two "y".
- In the last line the correct form is "You won´t want to fall in love more than once".
10 (ten)
Great job!!!👍
ResponderBorrarGreat job!!!👍
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