sábado, 27 de agosto de 2016

"Not Any More"

In the poetry part of the subject of "Literature", we read three poems, "The clod and the pebble", "Passion" and "Song" . Then, we were asked to use the subject or contenct of one, and create a poem similar, of our own. I`ve chosen "Song"(Lady Mary Wroth). Here is my work:

 In my experience, love is synonym of unrequited,
 but after all these years, I relinquished.
 She thought she`d always have me on my knees for her,
 but I got tired of the the horrible floor`s smell.

 After all, maybe it wasn`t that bad,
 but i`m slave of no one.
 So all that time was wasted,
 I think it won`t get better.

 Cause, love is like that,
 you`ll never know when it`s going to strike.
 So just take my advice,
 you won`t want to fall  in love more than once.


3 comentarios:

  1. Amazing work!!
    Your poem is expressive, complex, personal, well written... what else could I say?
    Hats off to all you boys who dare to speak which such clarity and beauty.
    A couple of corrections:
    - synonym takes two "y".
    - In the last line the correct form is "You won´t want to fall in love more than once".

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